Holy chit! I got about two lines into your story and got a headache. ....say it together now..."Punctuation is our friend".
Periods. Their not just for literate people anymore.
...btw, I am sure your story was good, you are most likely right and should fight the ticket with every ounce of your strength.
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[triumph]LS1's are incredible cars........for me to poop on[/triumph]
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