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Mustangbelle306 · 05-21-2002, 10:36 AM

Very nice writing Josh! It flows smoothly and kept me reading to the end.

You didn't kill the story with adjectives and overly wordy and descriptive crap. I hate that ****, but you obviously paid attention in Senior English

Keep it up!

05-21-2002, 10:36 AM	#7
Mustangbelle306 Yay for Chickys Join Date: Feb 2001 Posts: 1,532	Very nice writing Josh! It flows smoothly and kept me reading to the end. You didn't kill the story with adjectives and overly wordy and descriptive crap. I hate that ****, but you obviously paid attention in Senior English Keep it up!