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Old 05-21-2002, 10:36 AM   #7
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Very nice writing Josh! It flows smoothly and kept me reading to the end.

You didn't kill the story with adjectives and overly wordy and descriptive crap. I hate that ****, but you obviously paid attention in Senior English Keep it up!
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