Need opinions. Intro to the Sci Fi story I'm writing. LONG

Fox Body · 06-19-2001, 01:47 AM

Don't wanna sound too shallow, but ... I liked it.

Three main things liked about it:

1) street racing (w/ mustang)!!!!
2) the insertions of the night scene in between the racing scenes. Keeps you there inside the setting (reminds me of street races I've had at night, windows down, full sound of engine due to very little traffic and rolled down windows, cool breeze, etc)
3) IMO, I think it's well written--love the detail and writing style.

Kinda reminds me of a story that I read in MM&FF (i think, well it was some mustang mag) about the last internal combustion Mustang in the future and the guy was running from the authorities)

Keep up the good work. Well written and fun to read.

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'79 Mustang Coup w/ 4" Cowl
Stock 5.8L, C4 w/ shift kit
Holley 750 cfm, Edelbrock Performer RPM intake
1 5/8" MAC shorty headers, Al driveshaft
2.5" Off road H-pipe, 2-chamber Flowmasters
Front: 225/60/15, Rear: 255/60/15 Eagle GT II
Weld wheels (15x6;15x8), 8.8" Rear w/ 3.55s
14 x 4” K&N air filter (getting the Xtreme setup someday)

"Red, thou art my companion. Hasten now your quickened metamorphosis to
Green that I may conquer all who dare abide there beside me. May they be left
thither behind burnt black." ---Fox Body

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06-19-2001, 01:47 AM	#3
Fox Body Mustang Maniac Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: GA, U.S.A Posts: 2,266	Don't wanna sound too shallow, but ... I liked it. Three main things liked about it: 1) street racing (w/ mustang)!!!! 2) the insertions of the night scene in between the racing scenes. Keeps you there inside the setting (reminds me of street races I've had at night, windows down, full sound of engine due to very little traffic and rolled down windows, cool breeze, etc) 3) IMO, I think it's well written--love the detail and writing style. Kinda reminds me of a story that I read in MM&FF (i think, well it was some mustang mag) about the last internal combustion Mustang in the future and the guy was running from the authorities) Keep up the good work. Well written and fun to read. ----------------------------------------- '79 Mustang Coup w/ 4" Cowl Stock 5.8L, C4 w/ shift kit Holley 750 cfm, Edelbrock Performer RPM intake 1 5/8" MAC shorty headers, Al driveshaft 2.5" Off road H-pipe, 2-chamber Flowmasters Front: 225/60/15, Rear: 255/60/15 Eagle GT II Weld wheels (15x6;15x8), 8.8" Rear w/ 3.55s 14 x 4” K&N air filter (getting the Xtreme setup someday) "Red, thou art my companion. Hasten now your quickened metamorphosis to Green that I may conquer all who dare abide there beside me. May they be left thither behind burnt black." ---Fox Body